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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Sycotic_Sarah, Apr 18, 2007.

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  1. Those days are gone,
    never to return,
    the love we had,
    shining like the sun.

    I love you,
    and you don't even realise,
    the pain I'm in,
    even after the lies.

    Shaking, shivering,
    wondering, thinking,
    suffering, hurting,
    loosing, sinking.

    The times we had together,
    happiness shone,
    like stars twinkling,
    but now that's gone.

    The feelings returning,
    stronger than before,
    never to disappear,
    no escape door,
    tears forming behind my eyes,
    but no, I won't cry,
    hiding in despair,
    I sit and stare.

    Lost all hope,
    lost all care,
    lost all love,
    nothing anymore is even there.

    Believing a false feeling,
    visualizing a false dream,
    lives have been torn apart,
    all because of me.
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    :sad: :hug:

  3. :cry:

  4. twilight

    twilight Well-Known Member

    I can definitely relate to what you are saying. It's a very moving poem. :sad:

  5. leptoon

    leptoon Well-Known Member

    Mind if I use this poem in another song?
  6. Go for it, I don't mind. :)
  7. leptoon

    leptoon Well-Known Member

    Okies. I just finished the song, just waiting for you're OK.

    I will upload it and post it on my thread.
  8. I love it!
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