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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by PoQ, Aug 23, 2010.

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  1. PoQ

    PoQ New Member

    I'm tired of living.

    Each day I wake up

    my first thought is:

    "I wish I was dead."

    The days have become endless;

    a constant slur of time

    incessant, redundant,

    and each one more monotonous

    then the day before.

    I plan meticuously

    each detail must be consummate

    every sublety, perfected;

    because he will find it

    when I'm through.

    The land is scouted

    the items in hand

    the reasons -

    noble, certain;

    well, definately certain.

    The feelings;

    no feelings to share.

    This is happening so time will stop.

    So my world ceases to spin.

    So I can finially live in serenity.

    I am completely free.​


    Blar. So I typed this up and wanted to share it with someone, lol. Opinions anyone?
  2. L108935

    L108935 Well-Known Member

    I like it. I think it's nice. :)
  3. NotSureAnymore

    NotSureAnymore Well-Known Member

    This had a sad ending... otherwise it was good. As I read your words.. I pictured myself just laying in bed on my back and just reciting these words.

    Meh.. I'm not in the right frame of my mind, so I'm pretty visual at the moment.
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