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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lilly, Mar 14, 2012.

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  1. Lilly

    Lilly Well-Known Member

    I’m drowning without water
    Floating face down in the air
    Drifting across the ocean
    Without knowing I’m there
    I’m crying on the inside
    My outside face all smiles
    Diving deeper and deeper
    Swimming down for miles
    Searching for the answer
    Don’t quite know the query
    Yearning for acceptance
    While growing more the weary
    Drowning without water
    Floating face down in the air
    Drifting dead across the ocean
    And no one even cared.
     
  2. nagisa

    nagisa Chat & Forum Buddy Staff Alumni

    I like this a lot. Very well done.
     
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    so well written hun emotion it conveys sadness lost isolation great write
     
  4. Lilly

    Lilly Well-Known Member

    thank you
     
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