Not sure how to Continue it

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by carol2237, Mar 30, 2008.

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  1. carol2237

    carol2237 Guest

    SO here is something i was writing, but i am not sure how to finish it. Suggestions are welcome ^.^

    Her eyes slowly opened
    To an ungodly sight
    Tearful family all about
    She cries out to them
    But as she looks down
    She sees the fatal blow
    ....

    Caroline​
     
  2. itmahanh

    itmahanh Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    she unwilling cast upon
    those she loved
    and now understands
    her pain, their pain
    right now are one in the same

    Sorry, but that just jumped out at me as I read your lines
     
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