Nothin Much...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ~Tosh~, Oct 26, 2008.

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  1. ~Tosh~

    ~Tosh~ Forum Buddy

    I'm tired of living a strenuous lie
    watching the days go slowly by.
    I'm stuck in a hole that's pitch black
    what I've done there is no turning back.
    People acting as though they care
    lying to my face, how do they dare?
    I'm scared and alone on this cold land
    yet I cant go through with what I have planned.
    The voices in my head say I deserve to die
    Its then when I curl up and cry.
    I feel so low, I have no hope
    I struggle with life, I just cant cope.
    Right now I wish I could end my life
    So then I wouldn't suffer, the misery, the strife..
    So here is the end of my sad sad tale
    I try get help, but only fail.
    So now its time to say goodbye
    I hope in my sleep I never wake, I die...

  2. Anju

    Anju Well-Known Member

    That's a great poem, it's like you managed to describe the way I'm sure a fair few here feel perfectly, great emotion...well done :hug:
  3. El_

    El_ Well-Known Member

    As what Anju said, thats how im sure many of us here at SF feel, including myself, but just dont have the words to express it. Its a truly beautiful poem, as it sounds as though it came straight from the heart. I say that, because it touched my own.

    "Emotionally beautiful."

  4. ~Tosh~

    ~Tosh~ Forum Buddy

    thanks guys, but like the title says... its nothin much
  5. Stranger1

    Stranger1 Forum Buddy & Antiquities Friend

    Bravo, it was great!!!
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    great poem hun!!
  7. crackedglass

    crackedglass Well-Known Member

    i really love this poem hun, it describes how i feel quite a lot of the time, and i think you have really got the point of how alot of us feel..keep writing hun you got a real talent..hugz xx
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