Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by The_Guard, Mar 9, 2010.

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  1. The_Guard

    The_Guard Well-Known Member

    Don’t speak these words because then they become real
    I don’t want to know what you feel.
    Don’t tell me these lies
    Because in the end, everyone dies,
    Here today
    Gone tomorrow
    Such a deep tragic sorrow
    Oops wait, that’s right,
    There’s no fight,
    Nobody to blame
    You just lost the game
    Ooh yea now I know
    You were just along for the show
    Blam that’s the end
    I’ve committed, I’ve sinned
    Dead and gone for the time
    I’ve committed to big a crime

    Doesn’t matter what you feel,
    All that matters is what you steal,
    And you’ve stolen my life
    Now I don’t know what’s right
    So I’m just gonna die tonight
    Left alone again
    I don’t know how to win
    What do you see in me
    That made you want to be
    The reason I take my life
    The reason I continue to use this knife.

    How could you lie to me
    How could you think I wouldn’t see
    How could you let me believe
    That you actually cared for thee.
    This is where the bullshit ends
    This is where my new life begins
    Not here not there
    Not anywhere
    Dead and gone like a day
    Not a care for the way
    You treated me in the past
    Because like a blast
    The bullet left the gun
    Now I’m done.
    Now I’m…
  2. jcat

    jcat Staff Alumni

    i think its a dark and beautiful poem.
    i wishi could write like you do and let things out.
    its good and keep writing.
  3. Archon

    Archon Well-Known Member

    Wow, that blewmy mind.
  4. xXxBrOKenWiNgSxXx

    xXxBrOKenWiNgSxXx Well-Known Member

    thats amazing hun...
    i'm speachless
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