Numbers

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Louis03, Jan 28, 2011.

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  1. Louis03

    Louis03 Well-Known Member

    One, two, three
    Do you like me?
    It dawned on me,
    that I should dress in black, you see
    What's the difference if they think I'm a freak
    I have to express this damn pain, eek

    Four, five, six
    Something else from the bag of tricks
    And you, my friend, do you feel strong?
    Or is something wrong?
    Do you have the bull by the horns?
    And can you avoid the thorns?

    Seven, eight, nine!
    Another damn line!
    Now with some emotion!
    Lets go life is motion!
    Life is a hell!
    God, against you I rebel!
     
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  2. The Unforgiven

    The Unforgiven Well-Known Member

    :eek:
    impressive, really really nicely written. :)
     
  3. Louis03

    Louis03 Well-Known Member

    Thanks. :)
     
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    VEry expressive poem I hope you use that rebel in you to help you survive hugs
     
  5. Louis03

    Louis03 Well-Known Member

    Thanks V. Don't know, whatever happens, happens. :)
     
  6. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Hugs to you okay keep writing
     
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