Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, Oct 11, 2006.

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  1. Four in the morning
    and I am awake, writing
    Have I beaten sleep,
    or the demons
    that creep
    into my thoughts
    at this usual time,
    laying me to waste
    Is this time mine then
    At least for now
    It’s so silent,
    almost like peace
    The world is quiet
    and so are my thoughts,
    or am I deceived
    by the cool night air
    that speaks to me
    of winter coming
    And what will it hold
    that I have not already
    fought against…
    A time of sleep
    when something in me
    wishes to remain aware

    Last edited: Oct 11, 2006
  2. TLA

    TLA Antiquitie's Friend

    I like it....sums up my mood in the still of the nighttime.

    {P.S. I wish I was talented that way with expression and words}
  3. ...It's nice, for a change, when the nighttime is still *sigh*. I even slept in - haven't done that in an age...

    P.S. Thanks for the compliment :eek:) Writing jibberish at 4:00 in the morning doesn't seem like anything praiseworthy...

  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    NOT jibberish at all! I liked it very much - the feelings expressed and how you expressed them. Lovely, FAL1, just lovely!!:smile: :smile:

  5. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    I liked it a great deal. :yes: :clap: :cheer: :rose:

    With loads of :hug:z,
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