Oh God...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by BrokiN, Sep 21, 2006.

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  1. BrokiN

    BrokiN New Member

    You have seen in to my lonely soul
    Oh God... Oh Mighty Lord...
    What did you see? A mind trapped endlessly.
    If life could end, would I be free?
    free of sadness, misery...

    Their times I hold, no other choice
    You have chosen to ignore my begs, my cries, my dying voice
    Smiling now the devil waits, as death becomes hell's rejoice.

    Actions turning reality, oh one of many
    Unstable emotions, you relate none of any
    I ask you...

    Did you see the poison inside that one midnight?
    Not knowing what to fright
    Not knowing if I would see the light

    Oh God... Did you hear my fear?
    Tears, thundering to the floor
    Kitchen knife, held behind the locked bathroom door
    Blood escaping, my inner core
    Still not one can hear this lions roar...

    I tell you... Noone can truley understand
    Ask why I weep
    Why nightly prayers of life, to rest six feet deep.
    Life of brokiN ties, my closest kin
    Growing hatred, my unholiest sin

    Its just and endless nightmare,
    in my frozen stare...
    Betrayal of family love,
    How could they not care?
    Why would they do this to me?
    visions feign...
    Confusion in confusion, drives man insane...

    Father! You are dead to me...
    Faith is Torn, meaningless lies
    Belief is Gone, forgive my sighs
    My will,
    My will,
    Please be strong
    I am still alone, lost in a world gone wrong.

    I am BrokiN.
  2. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    :welcome: to SF!!!!!! glad you found us, welcome to the family. :hug:

    If you need anything let me know :)

    Your poem was really good, you are a talented poet. :clap: :clap: :clap: :flowers:

  3. Your words make me want to weep - I feel them - I'm familiar with the lament.

    Welcome to the place of expression, where cries of the soul are heard. Thank you for sharing yours, beautifully written....

  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dear BrokiN;

    Welcome to the forum. That was a lovely way to introduce yourself!:smile: I can relate to so much in your poem, it's painfully beautiful.:unsure: Thanks for sharing - please share more of your expressions with us. We're very generous around here with our feelings... which is handy, cause so many of our feelings are shared by our friends here... so we know we're not alone - and that helps.

    Welcome to the forum!:smile: :smile: :smile:

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