Old poem

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by NooSenseFantastika, Jul 9, 2008.

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  1. NooSenseFantastika

    NooSenseFantastika Well-Known Member

    [this is a poem that i wrote 5 years ago, when i was 13]
    (it is also the longest poem ive ever written)

    This is my favorite poem ive written, and out of curiosity i wana know what other ppl have to say.

    btw, in case it comes to light that this poem was also posted under the name SizamiTheBox, i am that person, got tired of the name and now i use this name.

    Words From A Mother:::::::

    Smile little child for today is a new day
    Giggle little child for life is great in everyway
    Play little child for the sun is shining
    Laugh little child for life has no room for whining
    Be Happy little child for there is no time for crying
    You are a new life and you have much to learn
    Like don't look into the sun, or your eyes will burn

    Smile young child for today is a new day
    Giggle young child for life is great in everyway
    Play young child for the sun is shining
    Laugh young child for life has no room for whining
    Be Happy young child for there is no time for crying
    You are no longer new and you have learned much
    But always remember I will love you no matter what

    Smile my child for today is a new day
    Giggle my child for life is great in everyway
    Play my child for the sun is shining
    Laugh my child for life has no room for whining
    Be Happy my child for there is no time for crying

    You are no longer new, you are a teen
    You have learned so much, but please dont leave
    You have so much to live for
    There are people who love you
    and we're so sorry for ignoring the truth
    We know we should have seen it
    The signs were all there
    The cuts on your arm, your dyed black hair
    We didn't want to see that you were so sad
    We didn't think it would go this far
    We didn't know it would get this bad
    Forgive me my child
    and come back to us
    Please my child
    Please wake up...
     
  2. silent_beast

    silent_beast Active Member

    That is truly beautiful. I love that poem....
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Beautiful poem :smile:
     
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