On the Edge

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by dark.streets, Jan 21, 2010.

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  1. dark.streets

    dark.streets Member

    Like a frozen sun in a desolate sky
    My life was without meaning
    My tears had run dry
    As I stood in ruins with nothing.
    I was devoid of all purpose
    In this dead end life.
    All my sorrows had come to surface
    As I held a bloodied knife.

    The scars of my broken skin
    Cry out in endless shame
    As the scars I hold within
    Burn in an eternal flame
    The shadow of my dead soul
    Tried to besiege my broken heart.
    Just as I thought nothing could make me whole
    You came to keep me from falling apart.

    As I stood on the edge of the Abyss
    You pulled me back to reality
    There is nothing to repay you for this,
    Except my heart for eternity.
    As rain descends from a starless sky
    On the lifeless sands of my heart
    You sing a bitter-sweet lullaby
    And my life can finally start.
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Beautiful write love it. I am glad you found someone who cares.
  3. dark.streets

    dark.streets Member

    read my other posts.
    It didn't last forever like I thought it would.
  4. DS

    DS Account Closed

    your writing is Amazing.
    i hope you keep it up.
  5. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Writer, write on.
    Reader, read on.
    Writer, read on.
    Reader, write on.
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