One More Day

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Things, Feb 28, 2010.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. Things

    Things Well-Known Member

    I felt inspired today, and wanted to write a poem. I'm not sure about the ending though:

    ---

    Give it one more day
    I'll stay for one more day

    Give time a chance
    One day from this trance

    Maybe if I let the clock tick
    I'll find a cure for this sick

    I'll give it one more day
    I'll stay for one more day

    The sun rises and goes down
    I'll try and outlive this frown

    I watch the morning rise
    Another delayed good bye

    One more day
    Just one more day

    As the hours become weeks
    The reaper, soon I will meet

    But not right now

    I have forever to die
    But only today to live
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    great poem hold on one day at a time it works
     
  3. PerfectlyMurdered

    PerfectlyMurdered Well-Known Member

    I love this poem. I feel the same way as you do right now. Good poem, I hope to see more from you :smile:
     
  4. Things

    Things Well-Known Member

    Thank you both!

    I'll post another poem now. It's 'Crazy Quilt'.
     
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.