One of my peoms, wondered what you think

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Is This It, Nov 5, 2009.

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  1. Is This It

    Is This It Well-Known Member

    Just a thought

    It makes you wonder
    Who is right
    They all seem wrong
    You wait so long
    For the perfect girl
    Then there she is
    But now she's gone
    Why carry on
    Chase her if you need her
    The best thing in sight
    Be with her tonight
    Or always wonder
    Where it all went wrong
    And miss the girl with which you belong
  2. corang

    corang Well-Known Member

    I like it a lot and a lot of the time i feel that way so that makes me like it even more.
  3. Tobes

    Tobes Well-Known Member

    Pretty good.
  4. nagisa

    nagisa Chat & Forum Buddy Staff Alumni

    Very nice! :)
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