~ Open Sore ~

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by A.SoNiC.boY, Apr 28, 2010.

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  1. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    something i came up with in my head in about 2min i really liked the sound of:

    I am the cut on the roof on my own mouth,
    the thorn sticking into my own side.
    I am the open sore, on a sore, on a sore,
    the spot where you picked off my scab.
    I am my own enemy,
    I am a traitor.
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I understand i am my worst enemy as well take care
     
  3. IV2010

    IV2010 Well-Known Member

    that makes sense.....I like it...
     
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