or is it just me?

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by forlorn, Mar 13, 2008.

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  1. forlorn

    forlorn Staff Alumni

    Ive time to kill'
    but no time to waste,
    no lawyer in his right mind,
    would ever take my case.
    you dont understand,
    ive not fell out my tree,
    id never hurt anyone but me
    and you say insanity,
    are you the wrong one
    or is it just me.
    colour divides you'
    so does the border
    but you fight on
    noone deprives you.
    youd kill your own brother
    for power, for greed'
    youd stab him in the back.
    its you who cant see.
    we could be alike,
    you push the button on them
    i push the button on me.
    what have we turned out to be,
    you must be the wrong one,
    or is it just me.
     
  2. That is a very powerful question, as well as a powerful and moving poem...

    (and sorry I'm late - welcome...)
     
  3. Lead Savior

    Lead Savior Well-Known Member

    I always love these that are critiques on human nature, great writing
     
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