Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ub3, Jun 16, 2013.

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  1. ub3

    ub3 Banned Member

    Broken toxic Loners
    unreasonable luck
    every cruel hope stuck
    head blown stolen life sucks
    clean cut fuck up
    Unrelenting bleakness takes
    custody stuck in this cold cells
    deliverance dashed faith
    Possibilities of comfort
    Hideous purgatory
    Embraced no other way
    Out of this cryptic cave of doom
    The safest place to waist this
    Empty time of no grace
    Murderous reality faced once again
    Biblically disgraced waiting for nothing
    Abandoned ones gloom lurks like
    Vulture waiting for crumbs
  2. WildCherry

    WildCherry Staff Member ADMIN

    Really powerful lyrics with lots of emotion behind them, glad you shared!
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Just wow hun OUch a great title too I do hope you share more of your writing as well hugs to you
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