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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Sadeyes, Dec 18, 2010.

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  1. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    You make a connection
    to a complete stranger
    who doubts your intentions
    but feels in his soul
    a deeper conviction.

    He then takes a breath,
    a much needed rest
    because of a stranger
    with little recognition.
     
  2. shades

    shades Staff Alumni

    Beautiful "J"...perfect!
     
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Thanks Mikey...miss you lots...J
     
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    beautifully written indeed:hugtackles:
     
  5. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Thanks V...lots of caring, J
     
  6. ~Young-Violet~

    ~Young-Violet~ Banned Member

    Thats lovely, also beautifully written I loved it, I've seen a few of your mini poems, you are a great poet, I loved reading them :)

    :hugtackles:
     
  7. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Thanks so much
     
  8. Youth

    Youth Active Member

    This poem has really good flow and has a deep message written in it's nine lines. Beautiful short poem! Speaks volumes.
     
  9. Junesong

    Junesong Member

    I like it, some really nice writing, I think I'll go look for some more of your little creations :)
     
  10. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Thank you both...hope you are OK...J
     
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