out with the hearts

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by SmilePretty, Sep 13, 2006.

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  1. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

    (in progress, not really finished) :dry:

    In with a bullet, and out with the hearts,
    Ending my life before it even starts.

    Lullaby kisses and fantasy dreams
    Muffled distance and silent screams.

    Gentle waves of hatred crash down,
    my life turning into a vacant town.
     
  2. Ohhhhhhhhhhh

    that's gud, finished or not

    FAL1
     
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    ...what FAL1 said... It's very good!:smile: Keep em coming!:smile: :smile:

    love,

    least
     
  4. SmilePretty

    SmilePretty Staff Alumni

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