overdose

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by weirdal, Sep 9, 2007.

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  1. weirdal

    weirdal Forum Buddy

    heya jus wrote this, its probably crap but have a read,, feel free to leave negative stuff

    Overdose



    you wake up to nothing

    you turn to despair

    heavens gates are open

    theres nothing left here


    you bring out the pills

    empty them out

    praying for someone

    to save you from this


    your eyes go all blurry

    you swallow them down

    you're waiting for nothing

    while everythings gone.


    you feel yourself fading

    your mind's going down

    you fall to the floor

    without making a sound.
     
  2. goddamnmad

    goddamnmad Member

    i think its good, a lot lot better than anything i write!
     
  3. weirdal

    weirdal Forum Buddy

    thank you for that, means a lot :)
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Really sad but I like it!
     
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