Ownership and Other Thoughts

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by BelovedDreamer, Sep 4, 2006.

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  1. BelovedDreamer

    BelovedDreamer Well-Known Member

    I had a dream
    and in the dream you touched me​
    And I was whole.​
    You ran through my blood,
    Drew incautious fingers through my soul,​
    Spread my heart wide​
    And took what once had been inviolate.​
    I wanted to tell you you owned me.
    But it seemed graceless​
    And uncouth​
    And feckless with youth and unbalance.​
    I wanted to give myself to you​
    Wrapped up tight like a present​
    And feel you tear off the confines of my existence​
    like tissue paper.​

    I have this odd feeling I might have already posted this...
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Dearly Beloved;

    Perhaps, tho I don't remember having read it. Even so, it's worth posting again - it's that good!!:smile: Beautiful work!!!:smile: :smile:


  3. What a most beautiful epxression of deep yearning. Oh I know it all too well - what it would be to be so naked before another, and be loved. Your words so echo in me...

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