Pain I cannot bear

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Jess, Nov 14, 2006.

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  1. Jess

    Jess Guest

    -Lost without you there
    A pain of which I cannot bear
    Memories flash before my eyes
    No one left to answer my cries
    Late at night I wake
    Alone, I tremble and shake
    From the pain I cannot bear
    Knowing you're no longer there-
     
  2. Sad_Rabbit

    Sad_Rabbit Well-Known Member

    I sooo get that, Jess. It's a sad poem that says so much. :hug: Rabbit
     
  3. CRUSHED

    CRUSHED Well-Known Member

    For me that someone was never there:sad:
     
  4. xan

    xan Chat Buddy

    Great poem, should have more confidence in yourself and believe so too... the whole element of being alone is very understandable right now... *sigh* two years.... talk to you soon x
     
  5. Jess

    Jess Guest

    Thanks for the replies guys. Glad to know somebody thinks something of what I write...
     
  6. Just wanted to add that just because there are few answers doesn't mean your words mean nothing - but that they leave one speechless, or thoughtful.... In other words, don't be discouraged - and for GOD'S sake don't stop posting!! Your expressions, part of you, are valuable... I think they mean more here than most other places - so keep on...

    FAL1
     
  7. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Jess;

    I like your poem a lot!:smile: It well expresses how I've felt too often. I wish the best for you cause I care about you.:smile: Please keep posting your poems, and thank you for sharing with us how so many of us feel.

    love,

    least
     
  8. Jess

    Jess Guest

    Thanks guys, really really glad you liked it.

    :sad: but sorry you or anyoen can relate.. it sucks
     
  9. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Its great :hug:
     
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