Pain I cannot bear

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Jess, Nov 14, 2006.

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  1. Jess

    Jess Guest

    -Lost without you there
    A pain of which I cannot bear
    Memories flash before my eyes
    No one left to answer my cries
    Late at night I wake
    Alone, I tremble and shake
    From the pain I cannot bear
    Knowing you're no longer there-
  2. Sad_Rabbit

    Sad_Rabbit Well-Known Member

    I sooo get that, Jess. It's a sad poem that says so much. :hug: Rabbit

    CRUSHED Well-Known Member

    For me that someone was never there:sad:
  4. xan

    xan Chat Buddy

    Great poem, should have more confidence in yourself and believe so too... the whole element of being alone is very understandable right now... *sigh* two years.... talk to you soon x
  5. Jess

    Jess Guest

    Thanks for the replies guys. Glad to know somebody thinks something of what I write...
  6. Just wanted to add that just because there are few answers doesn't mean your words mean nothing - but that they leave one speechless, or thoughtful.... In other words, don't be discouraged - and for GOD'S sake don't stop posting!! Your expressions, part of you, are valuable... I think they mean more here than most other places - so keep on...

  7. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni


    I like your poem a lot!:smile: It well expresses how I've felt too often. I wish the best for you cause I care about you.:smile: Please keep posting your poems, and thank you for sharing with us how so many of us feel.


  8. Jess

    Jess Guest

    Thanks guys, really really glad you liked it.

    :sad: but sorry you or anyoen can relate.. it sucks
  9. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Its great :hug:
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