pain on you

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoReVeR LoSt, Nov 13, 2006.

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  1. FoReVeR LoSt

    FoReVeR LoSt Well-Known Member

    I see you start to point and stare
    Like you don’t even fucking care
    You laugh at me like I’m a joke
    Well let’s just hope you fucking choke

    It’s time to turn this shit around
    Make u feel like you are bound
    No where to go, and no where to run
    Make you feel like you’re the pun

    It’s your turn to feel my pain
    To feel like you’re insane
    Have the scars and cuts on your arm
    Make you feel all the harm

    Just one day is all I ask
    To let me take off this ugly mask
    To show my true self and my heart
    Showing that ugly, disgusting part

    I’m sick and tired of writing
    Sick and tired of fighting
    Done with life and done with you
    I’m just ready to cut through

    Cut through the pain and all the worry
    I guess I should to try to hurry
    The ground is calling my name
    I just hope I have good aim
     
  2. painfulbliss

    painfulbliss Well-Known Member

    damn hun :hug: i wish my poems were like urs mine mean shit. i would gladely take that pain from you in a heartbeat u tell me how and i will. im always here for u hun.
     
  3. Sad_Rabbit

    Sad_Rabbit Well-Known Member

    "Well let's just hope you fucking choke" ... what a great line. I wish I had the courage to say that out loud sometimes. Your poem speaks to me, Hockeygal. Well said. Rabbit
     
  4. CRUSHED

    CRUSHED Well-Known Member

    :rolleyes:
    I liked these words
    It somehow describes Me

    thankx hun :hug:
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Brilliant xxx
     
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