Pain *trigger maybe?*

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Toki Wartooth Lover, Nov 9, 2009.

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  1. Toki Wartooth Lover

    Toki Wartooth Lover Well-Known Member

    The pain that I feel
    I can not explain
    I can not comprehend
    I can not take

    I don't know
    Where to begin..
    Where should I begin..
    Help me..

    The pain..
    It's not enough for me..
    So I grab a razor
    I grab it, clench it

    I feel the blood
    Pouring off my hand
    I clench it tighter
    Feel the pain

    I start to cry
    Remembering my horrid past
    I place the razor
    On the desk

    I strip myself, from my shirt
    I pick up the razor
    Place it over my heart
    Slit a huge gash

    I can feel the blood
    I can feel the pain
    I hold the razor up
    And make another cut

    I keep slashing
    It's a blood bath
    I wont stop
    But soon, all I hear, is a thud

    I wake up
    I look around me
    Is this hell, or is it heaven?
    I ask myself

    I try to get up
    But my body, it's too badly gashed
    I just lie there
    Motionless, helpless, lifeless

    I want it to end
    I need to it end..
    So I pick up the blood drenched razor
    And it's all done.
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I wish i could take away all your pain
  3. Tobes

    Tobes Well-Known Member

    I'm sorry but
    That isn't poetry
    Just like doing this
    Isn't poetry

    I am not
    Taking the piss
    Just showing you
    How not to do it

    I wish that you
    Would feel better
    It sucks that
    You feel this way
    My heart goes out
    To you today

    Stop cutting yourself
    If you can
    You'll scar your body
    I think it's stupid
    Don't you care
    About your body?

    I know that
    It can be
    But please try
    For the sake
    Of happiness

    Please don't kill
    Yourself either
    If you're considering
    People will cry
    And maybe kill
    Themselves too

    Once again
    I'm sorry that
    You feel so bad
    Stop cutting yourself
    It solves nothing

    Drop me a PM
    If you like
    I have a lot
    Of time on my hands
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  4. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    *tsk* She's freestyling about cutting...

    Poor thing - that was a wonderful poem, poetry is part of a person's soul. If I say it's beautiful, it is. It was really graphic and touching. :hugtackles: to Audrey.

    :hugtackles: to Tobes too.

    I'm sorry for your tragedies, you will be okay eventually, don't give up.

    I liked the first two verses, they were reaching out gently and 'pleadingly'.
  5. Scully

    Scully Well-Known Member

    I heart for you. Like always. It's never happy to read. But create and write disminish the will to cut. Well for me. So I hope you'll write more. Both of you.
  6. Toki Wartooth Lover

    Toki Wartooth Lover Well-Known Member


    Well I'm sorry if I can't do your style of poetry. I'm sorry that I was in the detention room with the hall nazis watching me like a hawk. I'm sorry if I'm not an awesome poet. I'm sorry. And besides, isn't it suppose to be from what I feel? What I want it to be? From MY opinion? From MY heart?

    And sorry if I have like a million medical conditions that clash with one another and that I can't seem to make the right god fucking choices.

    :hug: thanks. it was truly what I was feeling.

    Thank you. I wrote that trying to not cut myself. Sometimes if I write it down and just let it out it helps.
  7. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    You're welcome Audrey ^__^ :laugh:
  8. bubblin girl

    bubblin girl Well-Known Member

    I love this poem alot...its amazing & manful...I can feel it in my heart & my skin
  9. Toki Wartooth Lover

    Toki Wartooth Lover Well-Known Member

    :D :laugh:

    Thank you. That means a lot to me :)
  10. th3silent0ne

    th3silent0ne Well-Known Member

    Actually, it is poetry. Not all poems have to rhyme fyi. And this poem is very heart felt.
  11. ilovedilostwhatnow

    ilovedilostwhatnow Active Member

    im s-sorry i wish i could help you
  12. bubblin girl

    bubblin girl Well-Known Member

    welcome darling
  13. Toki Wartooth Lover

    Toki Wartooth Lover Well-Known Member


    Oh no, it's fine
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