'painful perversion' - *Trigger*

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by curtius, Feb 6, 2006.

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  1. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Futile attempts
    your own self diversion
    let your skin laugh
    at your painful perversion
    try to shut out
    but you crave your own carveing
    diffused by immersion
    leave your skin starving
    this blank fucking black
    turns purity grey -
    I need my own blade
    to cut it away
    The pain white hot slices
    reality fades
    though rightousness fights us
    I cling to my blades.



    C
     
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    Re: 'painful perversion'

    You should have put a trig warning in the title...

    But it was good...I liked it!

    Great Job! :D
     
  3. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Re: 'painful perversion'

    my appologies....

    MODS??? Can anyone help here?

    Im drunk anyways. Im always drunk when I write....



    Scotch anyone?




    C
     
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    Re: 'painful perversion'

    LoL...I just thought i would let you know...I am sure that they will change it when they see it!

    Sure i would like some!
     
  5. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Re: 'painful perversion'

    Eh well...

    Im sure you all know
    my babble by now
    It comes spilling out
    not really sure how...
    My sad drunken dribble
    scratched drunken scribble
    a curse thats my gift
    unconsciously sift-ed
    words and emotions
    powerful potions
    to pull up your feelings
    test your devotion
    my appologies please
    to those I might trigger
    I promise that next time
    I'll use my own censor.




    affectionately,



    C
     
  6. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    Re: 'painful perversion'

    I like that one you just came up with...

    You are a awesome writer...

    I wish i could write just like that!
     
  7. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    Re: 'painful perversion'

    Almost all of what I post on here is written here first. I always start here on this forum...then I scribe it into my book when I am done. LOL...Its my testing site!

    Just finished my first book....feels....nice. Not sure what Im gonna do with it tho! Prolly put it up on a shelf and leave it there!

    Thanks MODS for my trigger tag LOL. I do get blunt sometimes.

    Love you all!

    C
     
  8. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    its neat to see what you write to be honest..you should publish it!
     
  9. Jenny

    Jenny Staff Alumni

    Hi :)

    I agree with BrokenPieces.. you're a fantastic writer :)

    And no problem.. i added the 'trigger' warning the other day, just forgot to reply to this post :unsure:

    :hug:
    jenny x
     
  10. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    ....thankyou.







    C
     
  11. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    deep..i like :)
     
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