Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, Sep 26, 2006.

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  1. Endless shades of grey
    No light, no dark,
    and every day the same
    Shame eating me away
    Defeat, insisting,
    the only voice I hear,
    berating me,
    whispering in my ear
    I cannot move forward,
    do not want to look back;
    The pain of the past, and daily,
    is what brought me here, failing,
    to this place,
    to all that’s out of my power to face,
    all that’s out of the range of my
    vanquished strength to make a change

    I’ve tried…
    I’m paralyzed

  2. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :rose: :flowers:

    Absolutely wonderful hun!!!!!


  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Positively stunning in its clarity and the way it reads aloud, to say nothing of the feelings poured into it!!!!!:smile: :smile: :smile:

    I"m sorry tho that you're feeling that way,:sad: but damn, girl, you sure can express yourself... not to mention you express MY feelings so well also!

    love and hugs and strength and hope,

  4. Wow. That was awesome. Thank you so much for sharing!
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