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  1. |- Lost :☆: Dream -|

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    "This is killing me." I cry.
    I can't stop asking myself why.

    "Please, set me free." I plea,
    questioning what you want of me.

    "Leave me alone!" I scream,
    wishing this is all one bad dream.

    "Get out of my mind!" I shout
    yet I struggle with fear and doubt.

    "Why are you haunting me," I ask
    "Depriving me of the joy I wish to bask?"

    I don't want to live in anxiety and fear,
    in a world of delusional doubt,
    in which I question everything I hear.
  2. FallenRyo

    FallenRyo Active Member

    A very deep poem. Excellent form and very full of feeling

  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    awesome :)
  4. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    excellent love it.
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