Pathetic Poetic Words

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  1. Life doesn’t make sense to me
    My body and mind,
    relatively young,
    betray me
    I’m only in the middle
    but my mind leaves
    I’ve used up my wits
    I don’t get the point of it
    I’ve done all I could
    Took care of all ‘shoulds’
    for a wild spirit
    who stood outside the box
    I wouldn’t have survived
    without this otherwise
    But still I am damned,
    now without a helping hand.
    I should not have been different
    and just gone with the flow
    But I would've drowned,
    this I know
    So I tried another way
    many in fact, without sway ~
    I’m still fucked
    Life sucks
    And I don’t know why I worked so hard…
    why at all I bothered
    Just so I could describe this hell
    in pathetic poetic words…


    FAL1
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    :smile: :smile: I like it!!! :smile: :smile: And your words aren't pathetic at all - they're quite lovely, especially read aloud.:smile:

    love,

    least
     
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Your words are not pathetic;
    they are poignant and wise.
    Your thoughts are not contorted;
    they reflect a brilliant soul inside.
    You made the best of the hand you were dealt,
    with some detours along the way.
    And now, my friend, you impart the lessons learned
    with the magnificance you say.

    Big hugs and with much fondness and respect
     
  4. I used to say that if ya' had a "pity party" you had to blow up your own balloons ---- but this place does my heart good when I'm sadder than words (even my own). Thanks...

    FAL1
     
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