People care.

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by brocky800, Feb 8, 2008.

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  1. brocky800

    brocky800 Member

    I am currently feeling very depressed so I wrote this. I understand how it feels for nobody to care but I wrote this so I could try and be positive. It's only short but I hope it can make you think otherwise about committing suicide, in which it is starting to do for me.


    As the clear night falls, another painful day has ended,
    All those suicidal thoughts of which nothing is mended,
    You lay here now, wondering how life will go on,
    And you must realise that i'll be sad if you've gone.

    The knife and the rope in dreams that we share,
    If it happened, heh, nobody would care,
    The cuts and the bruises, it surely can't be worse,
    Don't let yourself become the next in that hearse.

    You start to think that everyone has it easy,
    Just consider that asthmatic who's ever so wheezy,
    He hates his life too but he never gives up,
    So lets all start again like a new born pup.

    We all have a purpose and that's why we're here,
    In a loving friends thought, in which we are oh so near,
    We are all loved by someone, so let them have no fear.
    That you will be the next one over who we shed a tear.

    Thanks for reading.
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

  3. Hey...Thanks for posting! (that was touching)
  4. brocky800

    brocky800 Member

    Thank you :) I've always liked writing poetry, but never in this way.
  5. nagisa

    nagisa Chat & Forum Buddy Staff Alumni

    That is a very well written poem!! :hug:
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