Perfect

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by shatteredsoul, Feb 13, 2006.

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  1. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    She was perfect in every way

    She was popular and loved

    Great parents and best friends

    Boys liked her

    Girls Envied her

    She was perfect

    But perfect was not what she saw

    She was weird and hated

    Divorced parents and cruel friends

    Boys didn't want her

    And as a single tear runs

    Down her freckled, imperfect cheek

    Past her broken heart

    It lands on her scared arm

    Drips past her forsaken body

    And lands on the floor

    Where she lays alone
     
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that was a great poem. I guess you dont have to be popular to feel that way. I feel that way a lot of the time.

    BP
     
  3. shatteredsoul

    shatteredsoul Well-Known Member

    so do i..everyday...and im not popular..well maybe in my own way..but still:blink:
     
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    You are number one in my books...minus all the make-up...and the...popular Attitude because you are a nice person just the way you are!

    BP
     
  5. Dead_Alive

    Dead_Alive Guest

    dont let the boys bother you... your better off believe it or not.

    You might think others don't like you... but you know what... 60% of marriages today are divorced and you are not alone. I bet a lot of those kids are feeling exactly as you are now... I bet there are boys there that feel that no girl would ever want to get near him either.

    Despite your pain... be careful to not rush into any relationships out of that loneliness because you will end up as prey for the tigers out there. I am telling you this because I know people who wanted a boy in their lives so badly that they compromised their safety and got raped... and stuff.

    So be careful and when you do find someone... take it slow and cautiously... dont let anyone take advantage of you.
     
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    great poem :hug:
     
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