Permanent Solution *may trig*

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by resistance, May 15, 2006.

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  1. resistance

    resistance Staff Alumni

    Tonight I'm feeling numb and cold,
    this huge black hole inside.
    Craving the urges to kill myself with the nearest sharpest knife.
    Sitting around in shear pain,
    watching the blood pour.
    Feeling the pain pump through my body,
    and know that this is the final stage.
    I want to hurt myself so very bad.
    I don't know what's triggered this off.
    All I know is I'm living for the moment,
    minute by minute.
    Waiting.
    I'm feeling weak,
    can't take anymore.
    Want to end my life.
    A permanent solution you say,
    maybe that's what I like.
     
  2. I feel it...
    but was it you who (quoted) said it's a permanent solution to a temporary problem. Still hurts no matter what. I feel your pain - why I wrote "alone..." I'm there. I reach for your hand...
    *SIGH*

    Another moment we make it through...

    FAL1
     
  3. Mem

    Mem Guest

    Interesting. So many tell us "its a permanent solution to a temporary problem". But what if we do want that permanent solution? Then where is the argument? Interesting perspective.
     
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    so much emotion to this poem...

    it was a great view on what it is like to want a solution to end it all...

    BP
     
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