Piece by piece

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by LittleSparkles13, Apr 24, 2007.

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  1. LittleSparkles13

    LittleSparkles13 Well-Known Member

    Every mark is a sign of the hurt you caused
    Of the pain you put me through
    I wish i could forget and i know the physical scars will fade
    But the emotional ones will always remain
    How can you hurt someone so badly, how can you hurt someone you are supposed to love
    For a while, i thought you didn't mean it but you did it time and time again
    You may forget the pain and what you said but i won't
    You think it doesn't still hurt well you're wrong
    It may get easier but i can't escape the pain inside
    So i hope you are pleased, pleased you tore my life apart
    Just don't expect me to be grateful
     
  2. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    I like this... although I think it would be interesting if you turned it into prose... not that it isn't a good piece already, its awesome. =)

    TDM
     
  3. LittleSparkles13

    LittleSparkles13 Well-Known Member

    Thankyou, i didn't see that you had replied. So also want to thank u for reading my poem. It is greatly appreciated.


    Fallen-Fairy
     
  4. Blackness

    Blackness Guest

    I really like this. its very true for me and I know the feeling. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work :)
     
  5. LittleSparkles13

    LittleSparkles13 Well-Known Member

    Thankyou, if people actually want to read my work i will post more. Thankyou.
     
  6. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    :clap: :clap: I really like this. Great work! :hug:
     
  7. LittleSparkles13

    LittleSparkles13 Well-Known Member

    Thanks, it's ben here for quite a while but no one has noticed it.
     
  8. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    Wow, I never saw it, I know alot of us find the threads by clicking on "new posts" that way we don't have to go through every subforum. It must have been posted when the forum wasn't very active and went unseen. But it is a great poem. I'm sorry it was missed hun. :hug:
     
  9. LittleSparkles13

    LittleSparkles13 Well-Known Member

    i have a few more of my poems, that have been unread on the forum, so check them out please
     
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