place your bets

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by necrodude, Aug 7, 2009.

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  1. necrodude

    necrodude Well-Known Member

    i always though i trusted you,
    but yet it came to this.
    you've gambled on so many things,
    now our relationship for a kiss.

    i would have give you anything,
    yet maybe with a price.
    but now its all gone crazy,
    because you wanted spice.

    ladies and gentlemen, gather round,
    its time to place your bets.
    roll the die or spin the wheel,
    but remember "NO REGRETS!"

    well this is my casino,
    your busy playing hearts.
    the odds are in your favour,
    and im falling apart.

    will the tears stop falling?
    can my heart be healed?
    will my love life keep on stalling?
    all shall be revealled!

    you've had your fun,
    now please just leave,
    i'd rather have my dignity,
    than have you see me on my knees.
     
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Great poem :hug:
     
  3. necrodude

    necrodude Well-Known Member

    nah it kinda sucks.., ive wrote better ones. hey your a chat monitor now! well done on the promotion! :hug:
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :laugh: Thank you :D
     
  5. necrodude

    necrodude Well-Known Member

    its ok. well deserved i say :hug: :D

    hip hip hooray!
     
  6. Aurora Gory Alice

    Aurora Gory Alice Well-Known Member

    Wow, brilliant poem Rob.
     
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