Plea...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, Mar 29, 2007.

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  1. Plea


    Sunlight, you mock me
    You shine into all my dark places
    and challenge one
    who has no strength left
    to join the journey
    I’ve grown so used to the blackness
    that you are a cruel and bitter joke
    each new day
    Mercy!
    Dawn,
    stay away!


    FAL1
     
  2. ~Nobody~

    ~Nobody~ Well-Known Member

    Wow, I love this. And I really epathise.

    Hope you're okay, :hug:
     
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Beautiful and so sad, as always. I wish so badly I could take away your pain but I can't. I can only be your friend. I hope that helps a little.

    least
     
  4. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    I've missed your poems, don't think I've seen any for a while, or I'm just unobservant...anyway, I really like this one. I'm sorry to see you hurting and suffering so much but, as always, your strength is an inspiration to me. :hug:
     
  5. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    Wow!!


    I love it, it's great, but then again, not surprising, cuz I always love your poems! :D



    Thanks for sharing your lovely poems with us. You spoil us... ;)




    :hug:
     
  6. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    ^ agreed
     
  7. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    :flowers: for you Gab :) :hug:
     
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