Please die tonight

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Menchi, Aug 22, 2009.

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  1. Menchi

    Menchi Well-Known Member

    Please die tonight, they said to me
    It's easier to fall and die
    Than fight and live, and fail again
    What is the point, why should you try
    To keep on fighting when all those
    Who you thought loved you went away
    So just stop living in false hope
    And listen to the ones today
    That have been there through everything
    Through every high and low you lived
    Through every cut and every blow
    And for each failure forgived
    Then lifted you back up to try
    Encouraged you through every fight
    So trust us please, just this one time
    Please end it now, please die tonight.
  2. Confusticated

    Confusticated Well-Known Member

    Thank you for sharing this with us =]
    Keep them coming.
  3. busenbust

    busenbust Well-Known Member

    I often feel the same way; have been for a few weeks now: please, let this be the day....hurry up.
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug: I can relate
  5. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    I had a little trouble with it. Those same voices who encouraged you through every fight are now encouraging you to die tonight?
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