PLEASE PLEASE give me feedback on my song i wrote x

Discussion in 'The Coffee House' started by jamie20m, Feb 23, 2009.

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  1. jamie20m

    jamie20m Well-Known Member

  2. Aaron

    Aaron Well-Known Member

    That's a cool song....can you make the drum sound slighly lazier and heavier?..it's a bit sharp for me.
     
  3. Thinice

    Thinice Well-Known Member

    jamiem20?

    The guy who posted it is called Alex. Sure that's your song?
     
  4. Vitreledonellidae

    Vitreledonellidae Well-Known Member

    people dont always use their real names, my name isnt julie either.
    nice song, god i wish i could sing :dry:
     
  5. emma2

    emma2 Well-Known Member

    great song xx
     
  6. LastCrusade

    LastCrusade Well-Known Member


    One thing for sure, my name aint my nick too ::cool:
     
  7. LastCrusade

    LastCrusade Well-Known Member


    just finished hearing out your song and watching your clip. The song is great :)

    but I think your movements need some improvement and the background does not really compliment your guitar. You held on to the mic and sang with your mouth blocked for too long. Just my opinion. Over all, with some adjustments, you could be a hit :)
     
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