Poem # 1

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by roxy, Aug 8, 2009.

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  1. roxy

    roxy Member

    Hey i wrote this peom when i was feeling bad,
    and i did it instead of cutting tell me how you like it
    i thought youd appriciate it :)

    The girl with no mask has the best disguise
    she can tell you a lie as she looks in your eyes
    the pain she feels is like no other
    her emotions run deep and the truth needs uncovered
    her smile is deceiving like i black cat in the night
    she needs someone there to show her the light
    she's been hiding out in the dark for too long
    and she can make you believe that nothings wrong
    but the jokes on you the game is done
    the day that youg girl finds a gun
    there will be nothing you can do
    nothing to stop it
    once she hold that gun and decides to cock it
    there will be no time for
    "i love you and i'm sorry"
    because the ending of her life will be the tragic new story
    so be careful what you say before you push her to far
    or the tale of her death will be your emotional scar
    forever in your head and forever in your heart
    so be sure you think twice before adding your part...

    please tell me if you like it! :)
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    sad ,but I like it :D
  3. pittfall

    pittfall Active Member

    The second one fits my mood ... thank you for posting it
  4. roxy

    roxy Member

    Thank you!

    And no problem! thank you for reading it!
  5. yursomedicated

    yursomedicated Chat & Forum Buddy

    Really good.
  6. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Can feel the pain and anger in this poem Very well written. I hope people stop hurting you and start caring Don't give them the satisfaction of even knowing they cause you pain that is what i think Take care of you
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