Poem 1

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Erode, Dec 4, 2011.

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  1. Erode

    Erode Active Member

    your voice, it still sings loudly into my ears
    i expected to hear it for years

    but alas, it was not meant to be
    for you felt the need to rid yourself of me

    slipped away, violently disappearing that day
    i still don't know what to say
     
  2. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    I like the complexity of feelings you've expressed with your deceptively simple language and rhyme. Nicely done! :)
     
  3. Erode

    Erode Active Member

    *blushes* Thank you!
     
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