Poem 5 - Devoted to user 'Aurora Gory Alice' by request

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  1. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    Lindy and the sailors

    The colours surface ember night,
    Away from fallin' sun.
    The jewelry in the skies above,
    Reaching for this one.

    Her burdens carry empty flights,
    Of stairs and ravens black.
    The night it wanders still alone,
    Twisted, paned and cracked.

    The red it shimmers! Orestes plays.
    The gleaming silver knife.
    The cold it bites. The drinks - they fight!
    The friends some leave with strife.

    An angel plays a soothing hymn
    On harp, as children dance
    Around a girl - a pretty flame.
    A gorgeous one, she'd lance.

    Her dreams are broke in rushing white,
    In rocks far from the trees.
    Her heart is giv'n, her peace comes near...
    Beware! It's just the breeze.

    A cobra wings, as she drowns out
    All the sorr'ws of day.
    And when she stretches out to Light,
    That quickly fades away.

    How much would pay for health and stars,
    Her oceans crossed 'yond seas.
    The ships they sail. They're sailing dear!
    Have heart -

    They sail for thee.
     
  2. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    :(

    Had a disagreement with <mod edit>, I'm feeling really horrible now.
     
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  3. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    I'm going to leave that sad smiley mood in until I get a hug from them. If that's forever so be it.
     
  4. Aurora Gory Alice

    Aurora Gory Alice Well-Known Member

    What does it mean? It kinda sounds... mean!
     
  5. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    It's not mean lol
     
  6. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    I was thinkin' of you and your tragedies.
     
  7. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    I was trying to paint your tragedies you silly goose.
     
  8. Aurora Gory Alice

    Aurora Gory Alice Well-Known Member

  9. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    I'll explain it ok ^__^
     
  10. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    Poem meaning

    Lindy and the sailors

    The colours surface ember night,
    Away from fallin' sun.
    The jewelry in the skies above,
    Reaching for this one. - This is about your username related to Aurora Borealis

    Her burdens carry empty flights, (You feel alone, like in an empty flight of stairs)
    Of stairs and ravens black.
    The night it wanders still alone,
    Twisted, paned and cracked.

    The red it shimmers! Orestes plays.
    The gleaming silver knife. (Your self-injury)
    The cold it bites. The drinks - they fight! (Your alcohol problems)
    The friends some leave with strife. (People who have hurt you)

    An angel plays a soothing hymn
    On harp, as children dance (You are blessed with angels and passed loved ones around you, guiding you)
    Around a girl - a pretty flame.
    A gorgeous one, she'd lance. (You look for gorgeous guys)

    Her dreams are broke in rushing white, (white water is very destructive, destroyed a few of your dreams)
    In rocks far from the trees.
    Her heart is giv'n, her peace comes near...
    Beware! It's just the breeze. (The people who you've loved who didn't get along with you or love you enough back)

    A cobra wings (the snake turns back into a demon, ie. you face your pain by turning around and talking about it), as she drowns out
    All the sorr'ws of day (with friends).
    And when she stretches out to Light,
    That quickly fades away (Things never get too bright).

    How much would pay for health and stars, (You want to be fully well but you're not and you want a starry destiny)
    Her oceans crossed 'yond seas. (When this is over you reach the shore)
    The ships they sail. They're sailing dear!
    Have heart -

    They sail for thee. (One day you will be cherished by many)

    Okay! ^__^
     
  11. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    Finished editing
     
  12. Aurora Gory Alice

    Aurora Gory Alice Well-Known Member

    Thanks Chris. :laugh:
     
  13. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I think it is written beautifully you do have a gift you really do. take care and i will send you hug because i don't thing anyone should be hurting :hugtackles:
     
  14. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    It's okay I'm feeling better. ^__^ Thank-you so much violet.
     
  15. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    *hug to violet*
     
  16. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member

    I'm such a drama queen XD
     
  17. DrivEthermissIon

    DrivEthermissIon Banned Member


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