Your poem (by My Melody): Colliding Praying to Gods and wishing on stars I feel so far away, alone again today Songs and chants fill the air We’re trying for something better Beliefs fall short and dreams unhinge Leaves spiraling downward in a daze So many aches and pains surge through me We’re colliding together, you and I Where are you? Leaving me lonely I’ve become something I’m unsure of Please hold my hand and lead me Far from the place with no light My poem: Stars and sunbeams colliding With angels' grace, I wish on stars; They feel so far away. Solit'ry chants fill the air. The clouds seem worse today. Beliefs fall short and dreams unhinge. Leaves spiral down in haze. My mind wrecked and pains not far. To eyes we should gaze. Where art thou? I'm so alone. Unsure, a thing afraid. Guide my hand - light my path - Away from demons, knaves. Rain as mist and beams as dust, I wander through my maze. I feel I've lost, but still look up... Thou'rt there one day - unphased. * The second poem above (not the first) is copyrighted to DrivEthermissIon. It may not be reproduced. It's okay, I loved your poem and the magic in it. Just thought I'd rewrite it to cheer you up. Note the rhyming and rhythm. I don't want you to feel bad coz you are comparing the two, I want you to feel honoured that someone is doing this for you 'My Melody'. You're a wonderful person, and a gifted writer.