Poem (? Honestly, don't know how to name)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by AlexElm, Mar 4, 2011.

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  1. AlexElm

    AlexElm Well-Known Member

    Love is hard to explain,
    It’s the one emotion that we cannot define,
    It defies all sense, defies all reason,

    Love is unique to the person,
    And it lies dormant until you meet “the one”,
    Whether it be a man or woman,
    They demand attention from your soul,
    From your heart and every living moment of your life.

    Love is when your heart skips a beat,
    When your heart speeds up when they walk into a room,
    The pang of sadness when they walk out of a room,
    The envy you feel when you see them with someone else.
    And the way they seem to tug at your heart and soul.

    Love is tolerant in its ways,
    It does not need your reputation,
    It does not need your wealth
    All love needs is your undivided trust,
    Your unconditional love.

    But above all, it needs one thing,
    The one thing that makes it all work,
    The only thing love needs,

    Is you.

    I finally felt love! I finally felt it! Unfortunately I cannot ever talk to her. Sad story really… Anyway, as you read above, this is my second poem that is in freeform. Hopefully you like it? Even though I wrote ~160 words about it, I reckon you cannot encompass how great love feel and how much it inspires you. It cannot tell you how much sadness comes by the fact they cannot ever be with you…

    Anyway, please comment. How did I do for my second time?
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like this poem abt love i don't know only the writer i think should give their work a title but i like insightfulness
  3. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    maybe someday one can experience the true feeling, and until then we walk alone, searching for just that.
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