poem i wrote

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Starlite, Oct 27, 2008.

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  1. Starlite

    Starlite Senior Member

    I don't write much ..but i have started it back..here is one i wrote recently

    Questions of the mind

    Hear the flap of a wing.
    Sounds of a crisp breeze.
    Rustles of the abundant leaves.
    What do these sounds mean?

    Shouting for someone's hand.
    Screaming out, "I cannot stand!"
    Crying in a distant land.
    Will anyone understand?

    Feeling nervous on the inside
    Needing to run and hide
    Hunting for the up side
    In whom shall I confide?

    Twists and turns around the bend
    Ups and downs my head spins
    Just another has-been
    When will this ever end?

    by Karren
  2. snowraven

    snowraven Well-Known Member

    Hi Star, keep writing. I find it really helps and that was good.
  3. Boing

    Boing Member

    The first poem I've read on this forum and I'm impressed!

    Nicely written, conjures up the imagery and good pacing.
  4. Starlite

    Starlite Senior Member

    Thanks snowraven, yes it is helpful!
  5. Starlite

    Starlite Senior Member

    Wow! Thank you Boing. That means alot to me to hear that. Writing used to mean a great deal to me, but I slowly drifted away from it. I have a thick book of them hidden somewhere, if I didn't throw it away!
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    good poem sweetie, i enjoyed it :)
  7. Oak

    Oak Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    I hope you didnt throw it away and will bless us with more of your writing. it is really good stuff you write and true enough it helps so much writing. hug to you hun

    luv, granny
  8. Starlite

    Starlite Senior Member

    Thanks Lynn :)
  9. Starlite

    Starlite Senior Member

    Thanks hun, i will keep looking for it! hugs
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