poem: in summer

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by dropmealine, Dec 8, 2006.

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  1. dropmealine

    dropmealine Well-Known Member

    in summer

    saw you in the summer
    will never forget
    all those places you told me you were going
    all that regret
    i was going nowhere
    maybe there was nothing to begin with

    you were the only one who could save me
    i thought of you so
    from the first moment i saw you so long ago
    and like so many others you are now gone

    why do i think there is more to it?
    do i always?

    perhaps you did save me
    we have yet to see
    but i have lost you forever it seems for sure
    and i will never look into your eyes again
    i don't deserve to

    it seems life moves far too fast for me
    maybe not fast enough for you
    hope you were never as blue as i am now
    sorry if you were
    too little too late as always
    pathetic

    don't know what would have happenned if i'd never seen you,
    but I must say you made my summer
     
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that was a great poem...

    and i know what this feels like..

    BP
     
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