Poem- Lost

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by confuzzle, Jul 2, 2009.

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  1. confuzzle

    confuzzle Well-Known Member

    You're fake
    You're hurting
    You shouldn't be here, don't be cursing
    You're scared, I know
    Don't let it show
    If they find out, it's gonna be bad
    They'll be hurt, shaking, mad
    So many different thoughts
    I'm sick
    I'm well
    I'm talking myself into a personal hell
    what should i do? what should i do?
    i don't even got a clue
     
  2. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Your poem expresses the confusion that I know I've felt when I'm feeling overwhelmed by a situation or what people are saying.

    Well done! You have captured the way some thoughts and feelings seem almost to "attack" us at times like that.
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug: :hug:
     
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