Poem- My Angels

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by MissKerouac, Apr 3, 2009.

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  1. MissKerouac

    MissKerouac Well-Known Member

    Another one. I don't like this one as much but here we go...

    I am a walking contradiction. And everybody sees
    the way I'm govourned by my soul.
    How pathetic, the way I try to please
    you, them, the world, while I'm digging my own hole.

    Can you hear me from down here?
    I hope I'm not in your way.
    Take my light, my warmth, keep it near.
    While in the ground I'll lay.

    Please don't try to piece me back
    together. I'd rather just fix you.

    Take away my devils and you take my angels too.
  2. Alais

    Alais Well-Known Member

    I feel your pain here, but some confusion, too. If you're down in the hole, how are you going to fix someone else? You might want to climb out of that hole to better help someone else. I think you'll be amazed at how much helping someone else will also help yourself. Hope you feel happier soon.
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

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