poem please read

Discussion in 'Suicidal Thoughts and Feelings' started by fweeps, Feb 28, 2009.

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  1. fweeps

    fweeps Staff Alumni

    Freedom is just a word
    One that I have never heard
    For I, myself am trapped in a prison
    That leaves my cut with a deep incision

    The wall around me is oh so high
    It is implanted there till i die
    It will not fall
    Not even when i call

    For it still stands
    Held by my minds strong hands

    You know, I wasnt born with it
    It seemed to grow bit by bit
    All the trust that I let stray
    Was broken in a steady way

    So Ive given up stopped trying
    And now I must be slowly dying
    For all the pain has taken its toll
    And I cannot trust a human soul

    by Maria aka fweeps titled FREEDOM
  2. jameslyons

    jameslyons Well-Known Member

    I like the imagery Maria.

    I really can associate with the ideas of being walled in.

  3. fweeps

    fweeps Staff Alumni

    Thanks :smile:
  4. Celebrian025

    Celebrian025 Member

    That was awesome! You have an amazing way of describing the pain that isolates most of us with depression. Thank you!
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug: awesome poem maria!
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