Poem- Seven Years Bad Luck

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  1. MissKerouac

    MissKerouac Well-Known Member

    It needs some tweaking, but I thought I'd put it up here...

    I see the way your blue eyes
    are seeking my acceptance.
    And its always made me sick,
    to know of your dependance.

    Look away, you'll never find in me
    the love you seek so openly.
    Others feel it too. But they all act politely.
    Secretly we hate you. Look at you,
    quite rightly.

    Obsessive, compulsive, possesive, repulsive.
    I loathe you.
    Deteste you.
    Is this the best you
    can be?

    I'll shout at you and hit you
    and smash you to pieces.

    Let go of me, get off of me.
    Its pathetic, pathetic!

    But the worst part of all,
    when I gaze at your complexion.
    Is that I look upon nothing.
    But my own reflection.
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Great writing :hug:
  3. MissKerouac

    MissKerouac Well-Known Member

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