Poem - Stone

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  1. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    (This is not a suicide poem, although I realize parts might sound as if it is.)


    If loneliness were tangible,
    you could feel
    the marble of her cheek,
    and wipe away her tears
    – a salty wetness –
    of which she does not speak.

    Amidst the chatter
    of everyday things,
    the clutter and the clatter,
    She is alone.

    She will never tell you
    where it is
    she goes,
    or all the things
    she wonders,
    or all the things
    she knows.

    In the milkweeded mornings
    and dandelion days,
    she will fly alone
    – unaccompanied –
    across the open water,
    from shore to distant shore.

    In solitude and silence,
    she will seek and find
    – within, without
    herself –
    a certain peace of mind.
  2. Animosity

    Animosity Forum & Chat Buddy

    Oooo! I REALLY like it! It's veryy good! Sounds like you have a talent for writing!
  3. itmahanh

    itmahanh Senior Member & Antiquities Friend

    Brings such a sense of calmness as I read it. Beautifully done once again hun.
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Beautiful poem,I really like it :) :hug:
  5. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Wow thank you beautifully illustrated with words what a talent you do have.
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