Poem with no name

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by butterflies32, Jul 20, 2008.

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  1. butterflies32

    butterflies32 Well-Known Member

    The darkness behind her eyes
    is the truth behind the lies.
    The lies that were fed
    bring her closer to the dead
    To the coffin that is waiting for her to die.

    But she is strong
    and it will not be long
    before she can give
    the truth that will let her live.
    The mask will be broken and she will survive.

    She does not know this yet
    but the world will bet
    against the friends that she will loose.
    The money she will win will buy the the booze
    that will help hide the lies that she had been told.

    She is weak
    and she is scared to look at her self and beat
    the ED that is staring straight into her eyes.
    For she cannot tell how long it will be before she can loose the disguise.
     
  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    That's an awesome poem Sam! I really like it:smile:
     
  3. Bagpuss18

    Bagpuss18 Well-Known Member

    Hey honey,

    That is incredible!! I told you you could write!!

    Keep writing honey.

    Love you,

    mj

    x x x x
     
  4. butterflies32

    butterflies32 Well-Known Member

    Thanks I was emotional and made it up there and then. had no idea what was writting.
     
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