Poem..

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Sycotic_Sarah, Jan 21, 2007.

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  1. The sun sets,
    the moon awakens,
    shining so very bright,
    as bright as the suns light,
    soon it shall disappear,
    out of sight,
    hiding in the darkness feels so very right,
    but i cant for all eternity,
    i have to sometime leave,
    i wonder how i can make them see,
    the true me,
    deep inside,
    where i hide,
    within my mind,
    i try to find,
    the end of this line,
    trying to find,
    a little sign,
    but i have so little time left,
    everything is such a mess,
    i hope oneday i will vanish from this place,
    and so hear i lay,
    thinking,
    dreaming,
    wondering,
    will i ever escape this alive?

    :sad:
     
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    How perfectly stated, and I too hope you make it out alive...and that is what we are here for...to get as many as we can to get through the storm and feel the sun...thanks for sharing Sarah, and hope you are feeling better today...big hugs
     
  3. big hugs to you too :) :hug:
     
  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I understand your feelings all too well. I wish for you some happiness and inner peace!!:smile:

    love,

    least
     
  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow that was wonderfully written

    BP
     
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