poems by taylor **may trigger**

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  1. Epical Taylz

    Epical Taylz Well-Known Member

    Every time we touch
    It's a love story gone totally wrong
    You won't think what you thought
    When you thought of that song

    Here lies
    The girl who cries
    Who's boyfriend is digging her grave
    Because she thinks of hurting herself when she shaves

    She tries to get people to help her out
    But she's speaking without saying
    Saying what's going on
    Every day at dawn

    You can see her mind, just look at her wrists.
    Do you not see the slits?
    Why don't you try helping
    The time is ticking, ping ping ping

    Here he comes
    Watch this tonight
    Look at her face
    Look at her fright

    Don't you see? This is coming to an end
    She only had one friend
    And he beat her so bad
    It's really quite sad

    Every time we touch
    It's a long story gone totally wrong
    You won't think what you thought
    When you thought of that song.

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    it's not that good, but thanks for reading it if you did :)
     
  2. LostSpirit

    LostSpirit Well-Known Member

    Thanks for sharing.... x
     
  3. Epical Taylz

    Epical Taylz Well-Known Member

    The day you move is the day I cry
    All normal people wouldn’t get why
    They didn’t know what we had
    What made you tick and sometimes sad

    The songs that we used to sing
    That song I set as your personal ring.
    That song’s the one that makes me cry
    Whenever I think of the word ‘goodbye’

    Do you remember the first time we said ‘hello’?
    And how desperately I wanted to go
    I wanted to leave the place with drugs
    To me, you guys were more hideous than bugs

    We conversed later that week on AIM
    You didn’t do drugs, that was insane
    Considering that’s what everyone did at that place
    I didn’t know if you were lying, I couldn’t see your face

    Look at where we are right now
    I don’t know when we got here or how
    All that I know is I love you so dear
    And you moving far has been my biggest fear

    Days will come and days will go
    When will you leave, ill never know
    I never got to tell you what I was aiming toward
    I guess im just a fucking coward

    Journal entries and a desperate sigh
    You should automatically be guessing why
    Stating the obvious, it’s what I do
    But here’s a little bit of a clue

    You had me at hello
    That’s the song
    And this is the day
    When it went wrong
    The song was a memory
    Probably more
    Not only that
    But it opened a door
    Not one literally
    Read into it please
    For once take me serious
    I hate being the tease
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    i love you, :( taylor
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    lovely poems, thanks for sharing :)
     
  5. mdmefontaine

    mdmefontaine Antiquities Friend

    hun, you are very talented.

    (sorry for this 'mom' question.....have you shown any of your poems, to your therapist? ) i will ask you this on a pm. tomorrow. in case u dont' see this)

    what a lovely writer you are.
     
  6. Sam2009

    Sam2009 Member

    your first poem gave me shivers. in a good way!
     
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